...Can i give some ideas?
Lets see...It was funny..."Can I shoot you in the head"...lol...well, to me at least. The voices could use a bit of a tune up and you could use some music during the "revolution" as you call it. anyway, its pretty cool, it need a bit more sounds and humor but, over all. I liked it...
(if you need help with music, I can help, just ask)
~Hope this Helps