it's pretty, but you could have made the pixels a little big!!!

Awwww <3

That was adorable!
It's a shame that it's so short though. :[

Too short!

It's too short and too plain.. definitely got to have more improvement. Especially the background and the story-line. But the animation was good though.

((( COULD BE IMPROVED )))

Well its an idea, but could clearly be improved, and just the little touchs could make it better then what it is today, Some really nice backround effects would help, and some backrounds with detail aswell, some smoother animating aswell as more content, i did find the flash a long loading time which could be compressed, anyways hope to see improved flash works from you soon...

~X~

Fist try, and hopefully last try as well.

Good walking anmations, that's it. It had no background and it got very boring. Stick to non-pixil animation, for your own good.