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^^Good Points^^
I have to say that after the Blues Clues part this was more interesting. It was a little weird, but I found the randomness of a talking slinky to be somewhat amusing.
^^Needs Improving^^
Why did you have the Blues Clues part? It didn't seem to add anything to the storyline and was just weird. Why was he having a seizure anyway? Not really liking that part of this.