What a great Flashy McFlasherson
Well, as I'm sure this review will be white noise...
Anyway, the art in this is simply AMAZING, and that's an understatement. The animation is smooth, clean, and clear. Everything in this animation was great, awe inspiring, and a new standard for other flashes to live up to.
Except one thing.
You're going to hear this alot.
All I gathered from the ending was that she left and went off, wishing that the shadow dude would get beaten to smithereens. Which he grants. Eventually. I think. Why she needed to kill her parents and give her... UNborn brother to this shadow is beyond me. Or I just missed something in the text.
Either way, this could have easily been a 10 if the story was better flushed out.
Great graphics. Weird ending.
I was astonished, how could this be your first submission? This flash was way above average, do create more flashes, I love your style. Great work!
You give a sort of rare finese to any situation that most could never posess, you give that dark cold fear and turn it into warm art.
Thank you for this submission and please if possible... Make a second Flash Animation Submission.
I loved the style and the writing in this. I can't believe this is your first submission. This is probably the best first submission I've ever seen.