Please check out our other submission Darn Monkey Intro. We need feedback to convince Ty to finish it.
Now, this is one of Ty's animations and he's looking for some more feedback. It was his final for his flash class and his very first animation in flash. Like with the last one there is no sound, but this one is actually finished. I told him to give this to our sound guy but he's kinda shaky on that idea.
Seriously, I know that sound is important, but I (Kevin) had nothing to do with the making of this movie. It's all Ty as it was his class assignment.
Still, all the feedback helps us out since it might give Ty the push he needs to finish the Darn Monkey cartoon.
Thank you all so much.
Oh and Ty will log in here and reply to any feedback if you have questions. Thanks again.
wow
You sure made that boy look quite scared. Graphics were really detailed and animated very well. Great work with facial expressions and making that boy look so scared. This was a great idea for a movie... it only lacked one thing... sound fx and background music. If you added these two things.. this movie would be 10 times better.
average
it wouldov been pretty good if it were to have sound
((( GOOD )))
This is really great animation, but there is no sound. Sound would make this a lot better, but its excellent so far. You should have gotten a higher score, but the sound kinda hurt your score, i like the effort, and detail you have put into this. The story is cute, and really good to watch...
~X~
good graphics + no sounds = bad movie
well not that bad at all since you really have good graphics and your use of the camera went right along with telling the story but at least, AT LEAST!...some bg music. i personally never would have submitted this without sound. it is incomplete. you have to think about all the aspects of making a movie, and sound is a major aspect that'll make a movie good. however, only if u choose the correct one that compliments your animation. other than that...fantastic!
No sound!!
This is definately front page material - it's a shame it has no sound.