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^^Good Points^^
Ok, there was some decent graphical effects, like the fire and smoke in the cave. Music wasn't too bad either. Seemed to go well with this.

^^Needs Improving^^
Honestly didn't find this too entertaining. It really didn't have a storyline to it. Just this guy getting hurt or into a situation where he would most certainly die, but then just showing up in some other situation. Seemed very disjointed and rushed. Drawings could use a bit of shading to make them look better too.

Heh still funny but...

I like just seeing a retarded people do stupid things but... it's just simple. Have you seen the Newgrounds Morons? I like more than it that, because it's more intelectual joke, this one was just simple like old Bugs Bunny or other cartoon. Some people like it realy, me 2 but not same like old time. Good luck and make better plz :P

Arne the retarded moron is so fucking funny!!!! :D

You are a very funny person and that was fuckin' hilarious!!!! I love the sequal too this stuff is the shiznite!!!!!!!! You should make a third! How long did it take you to make it?
Oh yeah and What is your real name?

you are so fucking funny
-David-

((( FUNNY STUFF )))

This one really made me laugh, and had great music to flow well with the humor, the sound FX was a nice touch, and decent job on the art like the backrounds and character, nice flash, hope to see more soon...

~X~

You should appear on YAFM.

That stands for "You are a F**king Moron", if you haven't watched that famous toon by the walrus. Please tell me I did not just see that. What did the mentally disabled do to you? Were they too innocent for you? Oh, and the incapacitation part, not being able to do almost anything, I'm sure that got you REALLY mad. Seriously, how can you call yourself a flash author if all you can do is play on the sick side of some of the bastards out there? You have officially proved that your brain is the size of a "Grape-Nut", and yes, even someone in the Special Olympics, who is handicapped, let's remember, could successfully do everything you do better. And no, don't reply and say something ignorant and dumb like "Oh, well this was just a cartoon, I don't really mean this in real life." Oh yeah? Well evidently you shared the opinion enough to put it in the public eye. And let's think: a Beatles song made Charles Manson go off: A completely un-racist Beatles song, (as if there is a racist Beatles song). How would you feel if someone went off and killed you because you made fun of an innocent minority? Oh, sure, it would make headlines "Ignorant and stupid animator's head sliced cleanly off" and the police would SAY they were looking for the perpetrator, but they really wouldn't care. They wouldn't be looking for the killer. They'd be laughing their heads off at your dumb ass, and so would we.

Why don't you go outside and play hide-and-go-f**k-yourself,

-A better animator than you

And I suck.

-Luke