Technically good, but lacking content

If you say your friend made the background I believe you; I've made "fake" old paper myselfs once so why not?

The animation is good. The mood is good, thanks to a good choice of background music and that old paper thing. It's short and pointless though, which I mean less downgrading than it sounds. There's no story or gag or punchline or moral or anything, and I think that if you combined your technical prowess with a good story or joke you could make some really good flash movies. But right now, this a just a "look at what I made!" animation for "look at what I made"-'s sake. Still, it's not without it's charm :-)

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I liked the frame by frame you did, and how you made the background look like old paper. The sound is good, i enjoyed watching this...

Hmm this is pretty good, but its a little too short, i think next time you should make it longer, and add more of a story to it, but good job so far...

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Very Nice...Keep it Up!

Good job! Simple approaches are the best when you are creating something for the first time...You show great promise!

nice stuff

minimal and nice!

keep doing that stuff!

OK, not half bad

I think it would be awesome to see a full long flash out of you using that creative paper-whatever style your using there. Good work. It kind of reminded me of that game I saw at E3 where you use a paint brush to control things.