Creepy
some selected aspects
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+++ Made me jump at the end, even on 2nd viewing.
++ I wasn't expecting the death to arise the way it did.
+++ The cuts, the noises... it all conspired to create the 'on edge' feeling I assume you wanted.
- Animation is quite limited - and not in a good way. E.g. toast walking across floor, arm of man...
- Graphics are unappealing and lack detail. Try and improve in that regard.
overall
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I actually found that rather creepy. It'll haunt me for a while.
Can't criticise much other than the graphics. The random first comment from the toast did kinda remind me of Saladfingers. But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
I'm off to watch the 2nd.