some selected aspects
+++ Made me jump at the end, even on 2nd viewing.
++ I wasn't expecting the death to arise the way it did.
+++ The cuts, the noises... it all conspired to create the 'on edge' feeling I assume you wanted.
- Animation is quite limited - and not in a good way. E.g. toast walking across floor, arm of man...
- Graphics are unappealing and lack detail. Try and improve in that regard.
I actually found that rather creepy. It'll haunt me for a while.
Can't criticise much other than the graphics. The random first comment from the toast did kinda remind me of Saladfingers. But that's not necessarily a bad thing.
I'm off to watch the 2nd.
get some originality.
terrible. simply awful. It hasn't even got a unique art style, it's like a badly done saladfingers cartoon- from the background to the sound.
very very poor.
More boring than watching your own shit just float
...exactly. you need a story. Best part of the movie was the text, the loading screen, and the sounds.
man that was creepy, the noises that toast mad were freakin me out, that was a pretty good flash. Keep it up
i dont know what those other people are talking about... this is the best flash on Newgrounds... EVER!!!!! everything rocked!!! keep it up...