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^^Good Points^^
Kind of cute. I thought the dedication at the end was rather strange, but still funny and made it more personal. Animations weren't bad. At least you made this somewhat interesting.
^^Needs Improving^^
A little boring to me. Sorry, I don't like making noises with my mouth, but either way, you still could have animated a bit more, and maybe done a few more sound effects than just the one for each character.