Overall grade: B+
Well done. I really liked that. You really portrayed the man's thoughts well, and the drawing style was really good. You get a six for pure style. Very disturbed, definetly fit the flash. The voices and song were good, loved the flashbacks, that definetly deserved a nine. A five for violence, but not for actually violence but rather for frightningness (not sure if that's a word, let's pretend it is) and a three for humor because it wasn't really humorous. Now, here we've come to the negative point. The animation. The movement of his eyes was a bit...amateur, but I'm guessing you're new to flash, so it's alright. Keep practicing, you can do better. You've got real potential, I believe one day you will be praised for your excellent flashwork.