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^^Good Points^^
I thought it was cool how you started this one out. You had a cool set of laws that set up the storyline kind of nicely. Pretty good animations and looked like a good start to a movie.

^^Needs Improving^^
Hardly finished though. It was interesting, but ended way too soon for my tastes. I think you should have definitely continued this in another episode or something.

oooh

The title itself made this movie seem rather exciting. A bunch of robots from a factory being unleashed in countries such as germany, japan and america... but then the movie ended... this movied needed much more to it than that.. it was rather short.

wha

I was thinking "quite ambitious considering you're obviously rather new to flash / somewhat new / whatever" but then it just ENDED without anyhing happening. I can't even make fun of "that one really bad scene" cus there only was ONE SCENE... and it was a representational one.

woah

that was quite possibly the worst thing ive seen here on newgrounds. i think i could see what you were trying to get across (with the flags representin countrys that they've taken over??) but that must have took you about 20 mins to do. take your time next go, get something done with a STORY not just movin images.

.....

This looks to me like someone had an idea, started on it, then got lazy and just bunged together some random scenes involving your robots and ending it after 15 seconds.

It's not enough plot to be considered a proper flash, and it's to serious to be considered a good random flash. So it's stuck in the middle, which isn't good. I'm suprised it made it through the portal.

If you're gonna do a story, actually have a story, not just....well..that..