Excellent Imagery
The whole composition of this animation was EXTREMELY good, and your interpretation of these lyrics was not only interesting, but consistant and fitting. It's remarkable how differently you envisioned it; I could almost contrast it to my own mind's eye as it played.
Aside from general improvements you can still make technically in animationa nd graphics by refining your drawing style and continuing to practice, there was only one thing I found to be offsetting by this piece. In particular was the singing man, presumably Joe. While the lipsynching was very good, he barely moved otherwise. I would have really liked to see some sort of facial expression going on; most particularly when he freezes, as the emotion didn't come across at all. Even if your intention was to portray no emotion, it wasn't clear enough to distinguish.
Great work, though. Keep it up!