u can work on it

it was no good.
the story line was strange and u spelled a lot subtitles wrong.
your animation can be a lot better but thats just somthing you need to work on.
and the part were u shout THE WORLD!!!1 kinda pissed me off.
but keep doing flash and you will be better in no time!

sucked like shit

it all suked

ermm...

not that great at all, put more effort into ep. 2, if you ever make it.

....

hey im not gonna be a bastard and tell u to quit flash or anything but this sucked for one reason horrible grafics just put more effort into the next one k?

no...

you see everything thats zery (other then interactivity and humor)
plz fix it... and try to improve on ur graphics ^.^