Make a menu
you should make a menu at the beginning of the movie. That way people will easily notice that there are/is an deleted scene('s). Further on the graphics were good but it's too bad it didn't last long.
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EDIT: For the love of god, watch the whole flash, i think its escaped many of you, but theres a deleted scenes feature at the end, its amuesing-ish, Cheers.
Well it’s the first partially big-ish animation that I’ve done well its more of a short, to be honest, but I thought id try and attempt something done all on the computer before i purchase a graphics tablet.
I'd appreciate some criticism, or some ideas on what to add in future episodes.
I have to say thanks to people on the Newgrounds forums, who helped me with some action script stuff, as I’m not so used to flash mx they were a great help especially Natemendal [Thanks a lot]
Feel free to contact me, comments are always welcome.
id like to thank my mate H, who came up with the idea behind this animation.
bad
It took like 30 seconds to load for 10 seconds of crap and a song at the end. it was pretty stupid if you ask me, some guy uses a metal prod to pull out a baby and then kills the baby. not much at all to it and no point at all. waste o' my time
Sa1nt responds:
See now why did you even have to reply, its been on NG for months and suddenly you have to knock the cool dude before yours post out of the lime light... you big plank of nails you.
:|
It was short, and it didn't make any sence, doktors don't kill people!!! At least they shouldn't... But why i'm giving a 7... I dunno, maybe it was good at one part. But what... whaa i'm brainwashed, voting good for something stupid that is still interesting. Take that as a compliment...
Sa1nt responds:
Your the grooviest replier at the moment, i liked that, perhaps there was a political moral to my naffy no sense flash, that hospitals in britain and actually most countries are full of neglect and lack of care for other people..... bullshit na, its just some random shit i threw together.
Way Too Short...
This showed a lot of promise...
The graphics were really good...
The sound was ok, but the voice could have been a lot better...
Pretty good... Make a longer story, and a better background... Then work on his voice a little cause it was sorta creepy and hard to understand... As I said above, this shows a lot of promise... I hope you make a long one.... I cant wait to see it if you do!
Cheers!
~LamboFactor
Sa1nt responds:
Marry me? the first nice comment of the night, you are infact my hero... no seriously, thanks alot mate, when i get a graphics tablet i'll deffinately make one better, my graphical skills with a mouse and photoshop never have been that good, thanks alot mate :D
aww come on...and you actually think this is good?
everything just put me to boredom. the graphics were kinda bad, the voice acting was just apalling(i could barely understant what the guy was saying...) everything else boring....
the deleted scene?? WTF! its just disco music in the background, and the surgeon(hence, he didnt even move position) just keeps sticking out his arm to the song. really dumb....everything...uh stupid and a waste of time. dont make any more. please. try something new.
Sa1nt responds:
i never said it was good, i just found it rather amuesing, no need to be mean :P