I beg to differ

I would say that there was a fair deal of artistic talent in that just with the way the words and letters moved around, great work, keep it up.

((( DECENT )))

This was a neat idea, and the writings were cool, but it does need something more, some effects could helps, and something more then the poem itself but i did like how you presented it, just needs more style and depth to it, nice work though, hope to see more from you soon...

~X~

Poem could be a little better

I write poetry myself so I did find this intresting. The only thing was that your poem used to many abstract concepts. It is much more effective on an adiance if you ground the ideas that you are trying to express in concrete details. I am just mentining this becase this is a problem that I used to have with my own poetry.

didn't even finish the whole thing

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freaking waste-oid

And the point is?

There was no animation in this. This is just a poem or whatever it was supposed to be. It does not belong on Newgrounds. Im sorry but all you did was use some program to make text effects. Put it somewhere else. Im guessing Swish or something like it for the effects. ANYONE can do that. Unless you animated it by hand wich is doubtfull because I have seen some of the same effects on Swish. And if you did animate it by hand some how, I appologize.