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The Result of Negligence

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May 31, 2005 | 5:44 PM EDT

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This is my first completed flash project, all visuals after the preloader were hand-drawn by me, Joseph J. Cockrum. Sometimes there is a little unsyncing of the music, but it isn't usually too bad, if you experience this, I appologize. Music by On Broken Wings, eulogy records. I hope you enjoy it, it means a lot to me.

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KantiKanti

Rated 5 / 5 stars

its perfectly clear

and i wanted the poem to keep going it was fucking awesome!



DarKsidE555DarKsidE555

Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Not too bad...

Well, the animation was quite good, and for a first attempt, way better then other shit that passes judgement (like barney bunch "movies" for example)

It seems there is a plot, but I think you missed to point it out correct. Anyways it's a quite good flash after all.


TheBroodian responds:

Hey man, thanks for the review, although I wish it had been for the revisited version, which I fixed up; but reguardlessly, yes, there was a plot, and I pointed it out exactly the way I wanted to; it's intended to be vague, but if you pay attention you can understand it.


Viewtiful-MastaViewtiful-Masta

Rated 4.5 / 5 stars

Hey man if thats your life then I feel sry for you

-_-... hey man you need jesus in your life! Not the devil! Your a cool guy! Just keep it V man! Don't do anything crazy like your flash movie did... thats for the nut job.

V-_-v-_-V-_-v-_-V
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This was posted by someone whom you don't know or care about.


TheBroodian responds:

Um. Moo! :D
Only thing I have to say is look at the date in which I submitted this.

And... stop using my call sign! XD


ChaosCriticisorChaosCriticisor

Rated 2.5 / 5 stars

Tough to enjoy

The problem I have with this kind of flash is if your gonna make something dramatic like this, there could be a clear type of plot. Not something sad and bloody you made cuz you were in a bad mood. I tryed to enjoy it cuz it looked like it took effort but it just not my flash.


TheBroodian responds:

Well I'm glad you viewed it objectively at least, but in that aspect you fail at the same time. This was to be a work of art (and my first completed flash animation), and as such it is and was laquered up in metaphorical meaning. Why would I make my 'plot' clear if that would merely degrade the value of art in which I was trying to express? No matter, thank you for your review.


XwaynecoltXXwaynecoltX

Rated 3 / 5 stars

((( VERY NICE )))

This was decent stuff, i would suggest add more color to the drawings and more backround detail is also needed, but it was decent stuff, and i wouldnt mind seeing more like in a series of some sort, the size was large though and you may want to lower it because alot of us may turn away when seeing such a large size, anyways nice job...

~X~