Meh
I liked the explosion of that stick hitting the land mine, but besides that this needed some real going over. I mean you cant just have sticks, you need to give them identity try to keep as far away as possible from sticks. Error 2, try and include background they really do set up the scene so much better. Error 3, try and include more in a trailer or a comedy part then just a weak little one act, mix it up alittle give the audience something they didnt expect going into it, maybe acouple of shorts in one movie would have worked.
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(Kiss my ass XwaynecoltX)