Nice work
I liked the music, it gave the flash more meaning to it.
I think the graphics need a bit more work, maybe spend a little more time drawing them to detail.
Author Comments
This is my first flash movie so its not THAT great, but I still like it. Its about this guys's girlfriend dying and now hes all alone...
Music- Hard To Say by The Used
Let me know what you guys think of it. Good, Bad, and the ugly, I know I'm gonna get trashed on! =)
**Somehow the music got all out of sync so all the transistion SHOULD be on a break or kick in the music**
((( GOOD SONG )))
Good song, and seems like the flash had abit of meaning to it, the song really played out well for the conten, but it could have been longer for a better effect, the "ARTWORK" was decent i like all the shading and face details in the characters, very good, nice flash keep up the good work...
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Serious good, pace not so good
Obviously you're getting the hang of things; think about ways to pick up the narrative pace. The spinning face, for instance: too slow, the eye not centered.
Guitar-Strings101 responds:
The eye wasnt really sposed to be centered. I tried that at first, but didnt really like it so I changed it. But I get where your coming from.
Not too shabby!
Quite enjoyed that ...and as many people have said, considering its your first.....WELL DONE, im looking to submit soon too for the first time and if mines half as good as that ill be chuffed!
Keep it up ..more more more!
Guitar-Strings101 responds:
Thank ya! And I'm sure you'll do good.
needs a little work
I loved the music you used, but the graphics need a little work. I was very amazed though at how well you showed him looking at the stars. Good serious animation that people could use to express that they miss someone. : )
Guitar-Strings101 responds:
Why thank you very much! I know there are serious animations on NG, but I never really saw much. Plus I have absolutley the dumdest sense of humor ever, so I think I stay away from me trying to be funny! Thanks again! =D