pretty good
but work on anthing that guy said
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This is an old crappy flash of mine, only 12 fps, uses 2 crappy freeware musicloops,
So don't bother reviewing!
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My first sprite movie.
I'fe maded it in 5 hours.
it's just an experiment, i want to know, will it be blammed or not
short
it was good but it was short thats all i have to say
it was good....
....but like the last guy said its too short
((( SHORT )))
OK this got off to a good start, with the action and the sharp looking characters but then it just sorta eneded and i was like whaaa, well i hope you work more on this, but also give more depth to it like a plotline some convos to why the fight needs to takeplace, and try and change it to more then just the avg fight that 70% sprite falsh's have...
~X~
It seems to me.... that you can animate decently.
Both the picture in the beginning and the sprites in general looked attractive as well... (Very clean and clear)
Its just, that this movie will always be prevented from having a higher score for a few widely known reasons. One very noticeable negative aspect of the movie was that the movie was that there wasn't any explanation for what was happening before or after the action scene. Next, the action scene was very confusing (mainly because there was no clear communication between the characters). People may wonder why the blocks with signs on them are being dropped and picked up. Finally, the movie was very short and so it gives the impression that the movie was rushed. If you clean up these issues, the score will probably be much higher. There are a couple little things you could do to make the movie just seem more... proffessional or pretty such as making the text be more than colored words. Or, you could have the Copy X actually doing something such as blinking instead of just standing there.... Anyway, I hope my advice helps a little.
Good luck on whatever you do next!