omfg...

That was PWN3D. I seen people with simular problems like that, when one car looks like another its best to look for your licence plate. Neat show though, I liked it.

Not bad at all...

For you first full length. The things I would say I'm sure you already know, so nice first try.

Good punchline

You could have made it go a bit more quickly (but don't worry, I used to do that in the past in my previous animations).

I think the graphics let you down.

Everything else would have been better if the graphics didnt look like scary, scary .bmp files... I did find the story funny, and it was good for a giggle, so for you next flash, i suggest spending some time on the artwork, even if its sketchy it will look pretty cool.
Try to establish your own stylem cos it looks a lot like every other flash, go for something new and adventurous, and the community will appreciate it, i would think.
Up interactivity by including some notes, a mini-game or development sketches.
Cal.

Great idea!

Hey,hey, that's a pretty nice idea you've got. I like it!

Still, things you need to improve:

Graphics. I'm sorry man but you can't draw for shit. You need to practice a lot more if you expect to get around 2.50. Try collaborating with someone at our Flash forum.
Movie length. Have you ever watched Knick Knack? I want it that long, with quantity of tools to choose between.
Sound. Please, could you add some swearing? That would improve it.

Things i liked:

Your intense humor. But that's also about it.

- Frostbreath