wow
that realy cool ! i loved the bit where hes gets shot on the stairs :D:D xx
Author Comments
Hows it going, this is my first Flash animation ever, and i hope you guys like it. If you do, i'll make more episodes that will unravel the story of "Boy."
Also, just so I don't waste your valuable time, At the end when he starts walking up the stairs, it leads directly to the end.
So, moral of the story... When the little bastard walks up the stairs... IT'S OVA.
This is somewhat like Salad Fingers, so if you like creepy flash.. Watch it. If you don't.. Well don't watch it. Thanks cuties.
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GRAPHICS:sorta sketchily drawn,ok I guess,but the low score is really because I never was one for subliminal messaging...
STYLE:kinda original.
SOUND:A looping soundtrack?Hmm.Again,the subliminal messaging is pretty annoying.
VIOLENCE:only in in the afore mentioned mind tricks...
HUMOR:There is none.
OVERALL:The main thing is do away with the subliminal messeges and It would be much better.Not bad for a first time animation.
Hart-Productions responds:
I hear that, man. Thank you for the time to watch & review it though, and keep up the good work.
I kinda slapped this thing together in a week. It being my first animation, I got a little antsy and just got excited to put my first cartoon on newgrounds, really!
Check out my other cartoon if you get the time, it's a little more stylish and has no subliminal messages whatsoever!
Right up your alley!
hahahaha!
but seriously man, suck my balls.
Okay i'm totally kidding.
But honestly.... Thanks alot for the review!
not much to mention
Not bad for a first flash but anyway those little drawings and textes that appear and vanish, they're really stupid
And there's nothing special about it that would make it worth to remember
I'll give you a bad one, to balance the exaggerate scores some brats gave you
Hart-Productions responds:
I hear that. Thanks for the review. I just kind of put those in to spice it up a little more or less. This was sort of a test more than a production I suppose.
But again, thanks for the review.
cool
i liked that cartoon
impressive for a first time
ok that could have been better in some places, but some of your animation was pretty smooth ( i was really impressed by the part were he looks up at that huge staircase- really nicely done that) i think you need more of a storyline, and well more of a point, but the drawing and animation was good. like you said the first thing that springs to mind is salad fingers (mainly becuase of the flashy stuff) but i think you really need to find your own style, mostly to avoid offending those brown-nosed ass-kissers who worship that guy who made salad fingers (im sure he's a nice guy, and his stuff rocks but seriously some people here are such suck-ups its unreal!)
anyway for a first time submission that was really impressive i'd only recomend coming up with more of a plot and working on your graphics- they weren't bad they just seemed a bit bland in a few places.
i look forward to seeing more of your stuff
btw don't pay any attention to that previous review- he's just a brown-nose who won't admit he loves the cock.
Hart-Productions responds:
Hahahahahahahah thank you so much man!
That review really cracked me up, and was really good to see!
This is the first time I've gotten " back into" Newgrounds in about 2 years.
I downloaded Castle Crashers the other day and it made me come back.
But thank you alot for the review and I appreciate it!
Keep it real!