Good effort.

Needs some work on the graphics and the humor. I really don't think it's going to appeal to anyone past puberty. Work on it.

Not Bad

Not bad, it might be more funny if I was 12. Nonetheless it was midly amusing. Just try to make more of an effort.

kind of retarded

it was ok,but uhh, not my fav, does not deserve a blam though

Good, but could be better

You need to slow down the words, they go so fast that I can barely read them, and I read really fast. Also, you need to make it a little bit longer, its not very clear that the end is the end. Otherwise, I thought it was quite funny.

mixed emotions

It was good but i think you need to improve your graphics a little bit. and add some voices or something.