Good Job!
You know that I always like your work. The characters were pretty intense.
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If you haven't seen Three Shots Of Betrayal before you see this, please do it. It will be a lot less confusing. This is a cartoon adaptation. http://www.newgrounds.co
m/portal/view/234552 Enjoy!
Good job.
Liked the graphics (quasi FBF) and the style (Film Noir B&W). Your animation has potential. I'd like to see more from you, just make it a bit longer. I don't know if it's the look you're going for but add a little more dialogue, or back story. The sound just needs to be turned up a notch but otherwise is fine. My only other sudgestion (not trying to be picky) is add a final credits frame with a replay button... it makes it look so much better than going back to the preloader. Overall, good job... keep it up!
Snoofalah responds:
Well thankee. I realize this film wasn't my best effort, but that was intentional.
nice storyline
loved the story line.......dont see a lot of these........hopefully ull be making some more :)
Snoofalah responds:
I'm very pleased that you guys like my work. I'm doing my best to try and be the best animator I can be!
hmm
This was kind of strange...the art was weird, but good. A very good story line. I'd like to see some more of these.
too short for an action
if u have violence in your toon, make it longer plz.
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