Knew it
First thing two things I said to myself while watching this were:
-He's Asian
-Naruto Music
Great job for your first.. movie on NG
*drools for icecream*
-Jade
This is my first movie on Newgrounds!
Wheeeee.
Be Gentle!
Hope you like it!
Knew it
First thing two things I said to myself while watching this were:
-He's Asian
-Naruto Music
Great job for your first.. movie on NG
*drools for icecream*
-Jade
umm WOOOOOOOO
i kno its your first alsh but couldnt make somthing cooler then you going to the beach and getting ice cream
This was a movie just built on improvisation =)....
Im just being realistic
I blamed it because it wasnt good. But who cares about me;) move on you will get better.
A good short.
Not bad for a first. The graphics were the best part of the piece... the music got a little repetitive, and didn't change to unscreen events, but that's not too major. I did like it, keep at it!
I'm Trying To Be Gentle, But... It's Hard.
Hey, don't get me wrong, I don't even know how to do Flash. But I can judge it. And even though this is your first submission, I'd have to say that the combination of music (I hated it, sorry, sorry) and the plot line just threw me off. The story went: You woke up, you walked, you went to beach, you went to icecream stand, you got icecream, you got hit in head with beachball, you dropped icecream, you were sad, so you went home. Or if you like it shorter: Walk, icecream, drop icecream, walk. Even though I understand you want to test out your skills, don't put out a flash unless there's a good story or something to it. Try short music videos or something when you want to toy around. And... how come everything's in Japanese when you live in Sweden? Do you actually look like that guy you drew? Huh.
Yes I do look like that ;) It´s kind of weird but it´s true..
I just like the Japanese drawing style, very facinating!
Tack för rådet! = Thank you for the advise! I will do a better story next time!