this is in the DBZ section??? WHY!?
The fact that this is in the DBZ section kinda makes me think "wtf" but then i guess thats no fault of the author. It's a nice plot and has good graphics, and i think you should consider making a sequel.
Meanwhile, can i get a staff member to remove this thing from the DBZ section!? Kicking someone from one side of a room to another does not exactly shout "omfg i'm DBZ!!!11 i pwn!!!1".