unexpectadly good
if thats a word anyway...
i'm with ya on destroying bad people from jail 2!
This is incomplete. The reason why i submited it, is because i have ran out of time for making this. its a piece for school.
based on the feedback i receive here, i will improve it and resbumit it on NG, but as for school i gota get it away now
unexpectadly good
if thats a word anyway...
i'm with ya on destroying bad people from jail 2!
It was
Good and i know you are submitting it to school but at least have it cut off at the end its kind ofa nnoying when it just repops like that and the music keeps going!
Needs work of course, but shows a lot of promise
I don't know what the full "story" will be when this flash is complete, but it shows some promise. I liked the "comic book" style why you showed certain action parts (the three panels when the guy lit his cigarrette, etc). I'm kind of curious who those two guys were that beat up the main character after he beat the child molester but I'm guessing that'll be explained in a newer version.
Some of the graphics need a bit of work (the way the way in the cup "jumps" from the cup into the guys mouth) and some of the more plainer background, but still, I look forward to seeing what's next from you
Pretty good
Keep this up, just try and make the hands a bit better, i know its hard to draw hands but try. And also i bet you'll get a way higher score when the full version comes out, hope to see it!
it was ok i see potencial
i think the graphics were bad but u did a good job with the fight scene when u just see his face and fist i thought that was good but before u submit anything else make sure its good enough
Yeah by the time i learnt how to draw good in flash i had already made a good bit of it, wasnt gona go back over it. Ill make sure its tidied up tho before submiting final version