Could be worse.... really...
Really, you could have been more creative, I guess...
That story is really used, you see.
And as other reviewer said : Can't you draw properly?... You should have put more effort on it before submiting your work..
But, ok, I guess you're a beginner (like me :D), sooo.. OK
Try again!
Ah, other thing... Try to not put an BMP background only..