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Dude i think i wet my bed

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hey this is my first flash ever thanks to all the tutorials on this site you have helped a lot. please review i would like to learn from my mistakes enjoy~

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cute
Did That Boy wet the bed in his underwear while he was wearing pants? i'm not sure if he did. He sleeps in his underwear? he does sleep with his underwear on. he look great in his Protective underwear on. i think he should sleep with his protective underwear on. it is recommend.
that blue cutie was cute
keep it up
Food123

Duuuude, make more

man this is great, cause he's basically foamy but he doesn't complain as much... something that I really want to see every once in a while. No offense if this sounds like I'm saying you're not original, but the idea for foamy was already done before that, just not as extensively.

You have a good thing going, make more, even if it has been 2 years

Not bad

For your first flash it isn't all that bad, i actually like it and found the anumation cute and the story funny. I guess you learn to do this on your own, and for that i applaud you. People got to remember, no one is perfect their first time, but from what I saw, you are heading in the right direction. Keep at it.

To boboor4...

Yes, this Flash is not the best thing on NG, but atleast he made it past judgment. Good job on your first flash.

As for you, these reviews are ment for helping the user by telling him what he should improve on for next time, NOT FLAMMING HIS WORK! Now I know that I do not have any Flash in the portal, clearly aware, but atleast he used NG tutorials as a guid to help him. So give me credit for that, don't give me credit for making the worst Flash on ng, because that flash was actually ok for his first Flash.

Keep up the work and use the tutorials.

like a bad foamy ripoff

he talked way too slow, and had some kind of echo effect that made it hard to understand what he said somethimes. you were either trying to be funny like foamy, or make fun of foamy, and you failed in either case. and don't tell me that just because i haven't submitted a flash that my review is invalid. i don't have to make a movie to know what a good movie is.

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May 1, 2005
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