loader...
you should put the ng loader on ur movies so they load properly. I should have broardband, but i don't & if you put the loader on, scabs like me won't have to endure pauses,,,
T.S.O.B.: The Visitation
April 30, 2005 –October 15, 2020
Here is its eulogy, a collection of the kind words written about it while still among the living. They shall live on forever in its place.
Author Comments
This is the second part of the T.S.O.B. series. A friend of Mikey's is searching for something in his old room, but is caught.
It was a bitch to film because Luis can't act serious for shit (this is old; Luis isn't even in Vali-Ent anymore).
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Blech.
This sucked even more than your last one, instead of just being an asshole, I'll give you a little help with your sound recordings.
I'm assuming you're using Microsoft Sound Recorder? If not, do so. Run it, then go to file, then properties, then convert now. Then under attributes, select "48.000 kHz, 16 Bit, Stereo", click ok and close out of properties, now when you record, it won't be as grainy.
Vali-Ent responds:
Kid, I don't see any Flashes under your belt. Not only that, but you're thirteen. Go back to insulting your friends on Myspace.
Needs improvement
It was pretty neat and original, its cool to see that you guys are working together on a project like this. My only beef is that you need to improve your acting, sometimes its so poorly done I had to hold myself back from closing the window. Show more effort, put your character to life :-p
Vali-Ent responds:
Luis is a shitty actor; his acting and not being able to act serious between takes distracted me, who directed and acted. (sigh) Thank God he's gone.
a little better.
well, this second episode was a bit longer than the first, made more sence as there was like 10x more dialogue if not more :D, and you actually found out a bit about the story line.
but still, you needed to think a little more about a couple of things.
first off, when Paul shoots the dude for the first time, he's still just standing in the same spot. when you get shot, your body gets joltet back in a reasonably violent way, and you've gotta be like... Arnold Shwarz to not get jolted back and even fall over.
then, after Paul is shot in what seems to be his right sholder, he extends his right arm out and shoots two more bullets!! haha, that would never happen XD.
again, he would have been jolted back, and there's no way you would be able to move your arm like that or fire a gun with such an injury.
still, pretty entertaining stuff. i look forward to the conclusion :)
(THE THUMB: UP)
Vali-Ent responds:
When the character gets shot in the shoulder and acts as if nothing happens, then shoots a Desert Eagle twice with the same arm represents strength. Though he may not possess mental strength, he possesses exterier strength. If you shoot a Desert Eagle with one hand, you'll dislocate your arm. It may have been far-fetched, but that's what it means.
Not a bad amateur film
The lighting was bad in places, but overall I think it was well directed, with the sound creating the right atmosphere. However, I don't think the guy getting shot up really had his heart in it, but apart from that it was quite good
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- 3.29 / 5.00