((( HUH? )))
Ok this was way o short even for me, it startedout good with a city a bomb and all, but after the bomb hit it was over??? you should add more like a plot a story, like maybe the guy escapes and wants to find and take revenge on who did this, but you may also want to add some more color like for the backrounds and so-on, better luck next time....
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