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Hey guys, this is just a little music video for a song i made, i hope you enjoy it.


by the way, my apologies to newgrounds for your bandwidth, but i mean you gotta get the full feeling, right?

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Didn't really go anywhere. Didn't quite get there.

Your work showed potential but didn't quite get there in the end.

The music was somewhat repetitive and the fact that it all was the same volume didn't help.

The graphics were good for the most part, except for a few things:
- The characters seemed to walk a bit stiffly. Where are their knees?!
- The close-up shots of the character were good but what happened to his head from the side?

The continuity between scenes could be better. In the facial close-up shots what happend to the background? The "plot", if there was one, looked like it was going somewhere when that shadowy stranger appeared but, as quickly as he appeared, he vanished.
The story seemed to alternate between randomness and repetitiveness.

Whatever "point" you were trying to make wasn't very clear at all.

I fail to see any point in this Flash

No, I'm not a cruel person but there was totally no meaning in this Flash you just made. It wasn't a music video to me if that was the impression you were trying to give. The music, whatever it was, was a bit annoying to my ears because it kept on repeating the same tune over and over. Then you saw the same scenes of some guy walking and then suddenly taking a ride on a skateboard. Good job on the graphics and the effort to make it but I cannot see any point in making it besides the fact that you were brushing up on some Flash skills.

eh...

that was ok i guess...eh not really i lied it was kinda boring to be honest i mean dont get me wrong and all the music was cool and stuff but i think you should work a little on the graphics. i see where you r going with it. just needs some tweaking is all.

Decent

Ok, So the music started out well and has alot of promise, but there is far too much repetition. That goes for the video as well. I looked away for a bit, and nothing had changed. Try to spice it up a little.

Good flash

Although the leg movements just didn't work right, when we walk we bend at the knees not the hips lol, but other than that good flash

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Uploaded
Apr 27, 2005
5:43 PM EDT