Didn't really go anywhere. Didn't quite get there.
Your work showed potential but didn't quite get there in the end.
The music was somewhat repetitive and the fact that it all was the same volume didn't help.
The graphics were good for the most part, except for a few things:
- The characters seemed to walk a bit stiffly. Where are their knees?!
- The close-up shots of the character were good but what happened to his head from the side?
The continuity between scenes could be better. In the facial close-up shots what happend to the background? The "plot", if there was one, looked like it was going somewhere when that shadowy stranger appeared but, as quickly as he appeared, he vanished.
The story seemed to alternate between randomness and repetitiveness.
Whatever "point" you were trying to make wasn't very clear at all.