pre madness combat
Author Comments
Un-named GOLD is Un-named 1 that has been updated, but some "errors", "bugs", and "crappy drawings" have been left in for tradition. Un-named 3 is going out soon, and there is more blood then all un-named's combined! No movie is bloodier then Un-named 3!
so this is what madness combat was inspired by
This was quite refreshing. You seemed to get better at this time. I mean, it is just a bunch of people being shot, but it's fairly creative. This was before "Madness Combat". I'm always interested in early Daily Feature winners. We've just gotten better as the site ages.
Sadly, we're less popular now. I love how they bleed. It's like little blood fountains or explosions. The music's pretty nice. You are talented for this time.
Cute
~~REVIEW~~
ok i have to admit this is pretty funny i especially like your characters they are not too advanced but they are simple and funny, now you could probably work on them shape em up abit more, maybe smaller heads would be fine, but as for this animation it was entertaining i believe the {NEXT-BUTTON] just in gets in the way, you may want to remove that and let it flow like a movie, it would be better presented aswell and just better for all and besides the button tends to get abit on the anoying side, Now the animation was great just seemed an issue with always having to click on the button, also noticed there was not really anything in the backrounds thats another little part you could work on, even some solid colors would sufice, anyways i gave a few tips in hopes you can improve on this and anything new you have planned, keep up the decent work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
For starters you may want to reshape the characters they are ok but abit more detail, Now with buttons its ok, but if you let it flow more like a movie without the buttons it will run smoother, to me in my opinion the buttons seem to slow it down and tends to get anoying with all the clicking, so try it out with removing the buttons, if you dont kike that style you can always go back to the other way.
~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and cute but needs some work.
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hmmm
I don't get it, it looks a little better, but other than that, it's exactly the same, nice job updating it I guess, but time is better spent making new things, because this is just repetitive.