please
make it longer
Author Comments
Well.... My first one got blammed, and I'm guessing this one will get blammed too... But its worth a try I guess, I'm still new at Flash so I'm not as good as other people. Anyways, I added sound, and a Play button this time, and even some credits. Hope you guys like it :)
So much for the remix...
No wonder that other one got blammed. I could make a better movie and I have no idea how to use Flash. Please, make it better, but then again, this was a remix, and it was bad.
too short
make it longer and make it so you can actually hear what they are saying. nice job though
It'll pass.
It's not deserving of a blam at all, but you've not exactly given us a lot to review.
The art was nice, though more motion from the "off-screen" character would be preferred. The squeaky voices may be due to a lack of an acting cast, but if they're a stylistic choice I think it was a poor one.
Not a bad little "one-liner" cartoon.
Amusing
Not a bad first effort though I think it would have been better if the kids didn't have those chipmunk voices.