Just here to tell you shadow dies even if you saved him form the floating island, but none the less a its ok
A bit slow
I keep wanting to press A or something to advance the dialogue.
Could be improved
I liked it. Except for Cyan, I felt that you have captured the characters personalities quite well. Cyan I think (just in my own opinion) would have not gone back to Doma because the most important things to him there are deceased.
As for plot, I felt that every scene with each character was a little short, but then again, I guess you can only do so much when there are so many characters.
Lastly kudos on making all the Figaro guards walk back and forth, even on places you can't normally get to.
This was a good start on this Final Fantasy 6 series of yours,the script was great and the plot so far is pretty interesting with Kefka and the battle between Cyan & Siegfried,keep up the good work.