What the heck was that?
No offence, but that sucked. I mean, it was really hard to follow the storyline and everything. But considering your a newbie at flash animation (and if your not, you might as well give up). It's was ok*.
Author Comments
EDIT : For all those of you who have been thrown into a hissy fit over me using one word of Japanese. Donovan is British-Japanese and sometimes uses words from his native language. He just so happens to call Merrick an idiot in Japanese, that's how its always been in the comic, kay? Don't wet your pants over it. =P
This is my first Flash with any semblance of plot, and it features a couple of characters from my three year old comic series, "Number 85". It was basically an attempt to get to grips with the program more, as I have been so used to animating in Photoshop and Premiere.
I will be bringing some better-drawn stuff later in the year after a spot of hardcore Flash self-training, but until then, have a laugh at this.
Either at the crappy art or minimal gags, its all good.
At least it's better than...ASS HENTAI.
<_< I hate giving pity points to newb flash authors.
Whatever, the flash isn't bad. But by no means is this anything good. It has direction, but it was a messy road to follow. And, oh great, music from Naruto...again. Of course, I shouldn't complain about the music, since already many flashes are consisting of The Pillows and Rammstein.
Let me say this, if the author continues to make flashes: I hope you can do better.
Nice looking artwork
Hello there ...
3 good things ...
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1- Nice looking artwork
2- Interesting characters
3- I liked the flow and the music
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3 bad things ...
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1- Would have liked to seen it a bit longer
2- It would have been cool to hear some more sound FX besides the theme song
3- I would have liked to hear the people talking, along side the text blurbs
Good job!
Peace,
'The Pumpkin Plague'
Close call.....
When I first saw this one, I was thinking "oh, gee. this artwork sucks." then I find out it was just a purposely bad little drawing. Pretty funny.
short and sweet.
the animation needs a little work, but practice makes perfect.. the overall movie was quick and to the point. I enjoyed the movie very much. too many people are quick to judge a piece of flash strictly because it has "crappy animation". it's an important factor, but not *that* important if the storyline can carry it to the end.
just practice with your drawing some more and I think you'll be doing very well here. you've got a lot of potential.