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A cartoon we made for school. Kris wrote it, and John animated it.
There is one missing line at the beginning of the movie, but we're too lazy to fill in the line.
UPDATE: The better, preloaded version is up.
I didn't even think it was possible...
There is actually someone out there who has a worse sense of humor than Mr.Flanagan! And they happen to be friends! Like always, the voiceacting sucked, the flash effects sucked worse, and the comedy... well where the fuck was it?! Like always Mr. Flanagan, you have proven to be a imature kid, with imature friends, and an imature taste for humor.
I watch this every day... xD
I LOVE IT SO MUCH! I can't wait for you guys to make more. I would send you questions. I like the fact that you made it slightly edcational, but nothing to book learnish so it's not boring. I also like the fact that you reffer to alot of cartoons I like. Like strong bad! and I think I've heared the underwear thing on the angry beavers, but I haven't seen that episode in a few years. I was just wondering why you use the number 1138, or variations, in alot of your stuff? I forget where else I saw it, but it shows up in quite a few things you and DHC make.
whoops. I rambled. Good JEOEOEOEOEORB!
rofl you answered all my questions about Science and that other crap
I must say the Flash ability at DHC has improved 5-fold since I first saw some of your stuff almost a year ago. This movie was OK. The beginning was pretty funny, but after a while it did get tedious. It was pretty obvious you were trying to be funny in the end.
Graphics were OK. I see you used a seperate movie clip symbol for mouth movements. The Super Flash Bros. have an awesome tutorial on their site that details how to do lip syncing effectively. I'd check it out.
Style. It was a lot like a school lecture, which I guess is what you were trying to obtain. I don't like school, and I don't lectures. There are several other school project Flashes that aren't lectures, try that style next time.
Sound was clear, the mic did make that annoying static sound occasionally when air hit it (usually when John spoke), try covering it with a thin cloth to prevent this.
Not much in the way of violence, why is that even a review criteria?
Humor. Again, it seemed a little strained at the end. In the beginning it seemed smoothe, but most of your jokes were sophmoric. (At least that's what my underwear says)
Overall, I'll give you guys a 6/10. Keep improving, I look forward to more.
Heh. John came up with the underwear joke. It's the only joke he wrote himself.
you get a B+
horrible static! overall it was nice, i now know that aliens had really big ears all along! hah! stupid hollywood movies! im sure you'll get an A (or already did... i wouldnt know).. err... get a new mic! :D
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