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Shades of Gray [Ch.18]

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Apr 3, 2005 | 2:59 PM EDT
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Attention Viewers: Please see previous chapters before viewing. Click on "Other Submissions by Jesse Cowell" to see previous chapters. Thank You.
Chapter 18: Calling the Troops
Chapter 19: The END
Update: One more Chapter!



Rated 4 / 5 stars

halarious as usual

Nice acting piece, you guys always do such a nice job. This episode wasn't as humorus as past submissions but you come to understand why as the piece moves forward in the plot. The music seemed a bit off but it wasn't odd enough to really throw off anything. Can't wait for the next chapter.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

Best chapter ever

I loved the ending, the way Eric was sorry, and then the joke at the very very end. That was just PRICELESS.


Rated 5 / 5 stars


Wrapping up... on the down low... we're high... looking good...

I've been serious though this whole thing. Seeing we are getting close to the end...this could all be solved in like 5 seconds... by Guy shooting Erik. Erik's g/f going our with guy then guy becoming pimp daddy of all the chick. :)

Kudos. FYI- Guy is great. all you dave fans can go away! xD


Rated 5 / 5 stars


lmao hehe at the end fricken dave is my fav character-"dude-he fucked his mother." "spfff, who hasnt"


Rated 3.5 / 5 stars

Eh, I'm not sure I like it

The fighting was obviously fake, not that I blame you there, that's a tough thing to pull off, but the whole ending I don't know. I just left a bad taste in my mouth. It's very close to being a cliche. Sappy "I'm sorry" ending. Though it's not really the end, there are still two more to go.

Nice ending line though :P Funny.