"Who cares about Cuba?!"
Very good! I have to say, your dialogue between Major Zero and Snake / Big Boss is excellent! I was kind of worried when I saw a Metal Gear spoof, being a big fan of the series myself, but you did a really good job! Some timing could have been a bit quicker, such as the transition from the HALO jump sequence to the Virtuous Mission briefing, but otherwise you nailed it spot-on!
Couple of things:
1. A British accent, even a badly mangled one, will do wonders for Major Zero. His eccentric nature was one of the funniest things about the actual game, and I have a feeling that you could play with it in your favor, as well.
2. Snake's voice is excellent...even better than NALO and LF's Solid Snake. David Hayter would be proud: in other words, don't change a thing with Snake!
Well played. I look forward to newer episodes. Your dialogue alone is worth the trip.