Eh, not that great of an episode.
The running away part made its point, but the "how does it feel?" and quiet reflection parts were just kind of lame. I mean, it's nothing new, and it's nothing interesting.
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Jeskid responds:
Ahhh thank god you were converted by the end of the series :)
Thanks man for taking a look
Jeskid
still doin good
"i was looking for a weapon" lol
Jeskid responds:
Yeah that actually happened to me!
Eric is a dick
Cowardly bastard. Then again, who wouldn't be scared of a guy like that? My only problem is that you didn't use the U2 version of that song. It sounded like a crappy light version. But it didn't detract from the humor.
Jeskid responds:
The U2 version would have been too serious for the scene IMHO. Glad you enjoyed it :)
Jeskid
Touches the heart as well as the mind.
The series is well paced and cleverly planned, mixed with absolute hilarity. This one has mixed action with comedy and emotion. The end where Eric thinks about hanging with his friends really got me feeling bad for him and everyone. Well done as usual.
It was ok touching at times
i think it just goes to show that when it comes right down to it a black man cant be a white mans best friend
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Daily 4th Place April 1, 2005