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Just Who is Steve Mckeeri

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Well this is an animation im working on its not complete yet but i just want some advice it i should continue or not

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so umm

you should definetly get better voices , these were awful, like the fighting scene you should do fbf there...

ok

not bad.... too short.
if it was longer, it would've done better.

Nice work

Hey, i just watched Mexico, and fought it was brilliant, front page material! haha.

But it got blammed, sorry im not reviewing this. But i really think Mexico shouldnt of been blammed. Maybe if you add a few sound effects, and a bit of music when the fight scene is happening it would survive, If you need any help with it, id definatly help you, really funny it is.

unbalanced

this film was absolutley horrible slopply put together, you didn't even bother to create more than one drawing of the characters for each scene you just kind of fliped them around. and the movie ended in a white screen! there was absolutley no bitchin gypsies or homeless bums! i only found a few parts of this movie funny. not very good at all. try making your characters move.

motion tweens aplenty

yes do continue trying to work on it. it will give you good experience. Try to make the whole thing look a lot smoother.

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Votes
9
Score
3.41 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 27, 2005
6:54 AM EST