My Turn...

Alright... all in all a good movie. The graphics were good enough and the style was awesome. I agree with someone_369 that it did seem a cross of DBZ, PPG, and Invader Zim. If thats what you went for then you blended them all together pretty well. I only gave you a 5 for sound because I didn't like the music and that really killed that part for me. You had good voice acting for this and had the lip sync down pretty well. Good violence but could have used alittle more detail, like sparks and other things. Some parts did seem comical and thats what got you the 6 for humor.

4/5

I KNEW it has something to do with FLCL

some parts of it made me feel like it was closely related to FLCL, especially when 1 of them was red and going at each other, and the ending just assured me even more. It is how the guy said before me, a little dbz, a little power puff, and i'd say a lil FLCL too.

now critique-ing, i think you have very smooth animation as it is, your voice acting is not bad at all. I'd say work on trying to give a little more humor here and there, when he returns to speak with her, makes me smile to see his situation, but humor is key in alot of things. Violence, not too much and not too little, u got it down fine. Style, try to incorporate your own things and ideas, and not so much rely on things manifested from animations you watch.

Great man, and if you don't find this useful, its up to you to choose to listen or not. Great things can happen with this flash, make it happen.

Good flash

Dude. Your styl is quite good, you got my thumbs up You used a cool shockwave effect and good lip sync. Made me laugh at some bits. The thing that I didn't liked was that you used the same music you have already used in your other flash movies.
But anyway, it was very good n_n.

Good.

This flash felt like Invader Zim meets Powderpuff Girls meets Dragon Ball Z. Despite this, it still felt like an original idea. It was also nicely put together which made it fun to watch. The voice acting wasn't half bad either. Good work.

Very Very Cool!!!

OOOOOO AHHHHHH Adam Android!!!