Interesting...

I actually decided to check this Flash out, after your blatant self-promotion on the BBS, and I was pleasantly surprised. Although the animation wasn't that great, your ideas still came across reasonably well.

I thought the storyline itself was interesting, and despite what the others might be saying, I liked the black face. It adds some style to the piece, and is a hell of a lot better than a badly drawn human face. As I said before, your animation was fairly simplistic, but there is plenty of room for improvement, and your ideas are already pretty good.

All up, not a bad flash at all, ensoph. Keep up the good work.

Good work

Well that was interesting, and extremely good for a first flash. Listen, make more. The art was good, not spectacular but it was good, I mean, definately above average. Nice smooth animation, a bit lacking in color - but I guess that's kind of the point. The sound seemed a bit choppy or something like that, but it fit. It was pretty short, but still good. I'm still thinking about what it means and will probably watch it a few more times. Nice work, please make more in the future.

Holy Shit!

I can't believe this is your first flash! Listen to me and listen to me good, if you kepp this up, you have the potential to be one of the greatest flash artists on Ng. Way to go!

not bad

cool first animation. very original idea too. i liked this one.

Nice First Attempt

The animation and what not was very good for a first timer and I must say that i am extremely impressed! The only thing that I could possibly complain about is that the movie itself needed more. More story. More action. Just a little bit more of every thing. But still, very, VERY good!