ok

not too bad. a little short, which is why i think this has such a low score... which is rather unfair because it wasn't that bad of an animation. good luck on your next animation.

umm

I dont know what that last guy is talking about, bcause hes just being an ass, i think this is good, and I wud watch more of it

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well... first off lets work on your spelling joe. redo 1-8th grade, then come back here and resubmit this. also, the animation sucks far too much to be distorted further by a lame attempt at retro-style.

The characters kinda sucked and the storyline made me sleepy.

i give you a 1/5, just for putting some time and effort into not creating a complete BLAM entry.

Well, not too bad.

Well, I like the concept. maybe you can get someone to help you with the sound. I tried to not let that interfere. A good concept, and the characters weren't too bad. Also, in parts the writing was illegible (I know it's supposed to be though) and I don't know if you mwant to spell brakes wrong.

Ok

The animatio sucked, but it looked like a crappy old 'saftey' film, cool...It was oook..I guess