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Oh My God - Pilot

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here's an awful series - part one!!

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not that great

It was okay



Original

I really like where this could go. I don't think any1 has ever made a series of this but weve all been thinking it.
This could definitely become one of the best serieses on Newgrounds.
Lookin forward to the next one.
Good Luck



Nice

Loved the look of the whole thing, it all looked very smooth. Good choice of soundtack as well with Bloc Party and the Kaiser Chiefs. Look forward to more interesting storylines in the next episode(s)! Well done.



was good for a pilot

i liked the character designs, and except for Lucifer's voice, the voices were okay. needs a little timing work, tho. comedy has a pace to it, and if you don't keep up with the pace, it falls flat. if someone has to walk offscreen, for instance, have them saying something as they go. or have something happening in the forground as they exit the room in the background. don't just show them walking off. another technique would involve starting to show them depart, and then refocusing on the story quickly, using only the sounds of their footsteps to indicate that they've really left the scene.

don't let things happen one at a time in a nice, neat sequence of events. real life isn't like that, and it makes your stories more believeable if things overlap a bit.



Bloc Party kicks.

Bloc Party is awesome. Just got Silent Alarm a few weeks ago.


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Mar 19, 2005
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Comedy - Original
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