... I understand this is your first cartoon and I probly can't do any better (considering I know little about flash animation) but seriously... It was poorly recorded and not funny at all. The animation was ok though. The credits were probly the funniest part. Of course that part sucked too.
a well doned flash allwais cheers up enybudy.....
it was made professionly... i can tell this cause you can see the crayon lines stayin the same. Its good see that someone is doing animating the pro way.
Yeah, the animation at the start was o.k i guess and then the rest was obvioseley not as good but i liked it, kant wait for more.
you know what to come to think of it the only funny part was the credits. hu.
pretty interesting and highly entertaining animation.
i liked this one. i hope to see some more.