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Sketchyness:Random Tests

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**********UPDATE Date:1/07/05*******
hi guys ummm well im in full scale production on sketchynes the movie and Random tests 2 hope you enjoy them


Saftey lesson with sketch,sketch will show you not wat to do in various situations plz give feedbak so i may better it or some idea's for Sketchyness:Random tests 2

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Arhh, my song!

I never quite imagined it would be used this way... Just you kinda over used it. It went alright in the credits but not in the animation. Anyway graphics were okay, needs a little work. Otherwise a decent effort. 2/5

-Squeeby

Ow..

Dynamite up the shitter, that seems very painful even before the explosion.

Good job, nice message too.

Boring and not close to being funny

Its obvious that your trying to be funny and its not. Your movie blows. The graphics were very sad, the sound sucked and you put in WAAAAY to much text and like 4 seconds of animation. You suck

MeatPieSauceDotCom responds:

Well man your not even a registered user so submit sumthing better and then have the balls to speak so im sorry i don't understand noob

Give me a break

"see kids, anything can be dangersous if you are a dumbass", even making flashes when you suck at it.

MeatPieSauceDotCom responds:

What r u talking about noobie,I don't see n e one watching your animations...oh wait sorry i just checked you don't have n e do you, do oh well that's to bad there,there one day.At least have a decent or a flash movie on before you critisize:P
P.S sticks don't count they suck

Suggestions

Fist off, learn the difference between Their, there and they're; and also your and you're. Very basic, and very annoying.

Make a scene, as in a setting, as in don't have the background all be some grayscale nothingness. Once you put your characters in a place/environment, there are so many more things you can do with them. And anything but a grayscale nothingness would make it so much more intersting for the rest of us.

Great syle, and great song. Polish the humor. My suggestion is to write down the jokes and show them to other people. Almost all of the time telling a joke is about using the right words, and usually as few as possible. If you need to, explin the funny part to othyer people, and have them explain it back to get ideas about how to word it better.
OK, that's enough. Keep at it.

MeatPieSauceDotCom responds:

well the greyscale is suppose to be a test enviorment or when he's monologing which you shall see in later sketchyness episodes so if you don't mind read the title (Sketchyness:Random Tests)

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Mar 13, 2005
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