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^^Good Points^^
A very good effort and an interesting movie. Though the storyline has no voices and really no people or characters, it still has an interesting storyline, which is neat. I liked the sound effects, and the song was good even though it didn't have much to do with the movie.
^^Needs Improving^^
The art could have used the most improving. I see you didn't really use and shading at all, which is pretty easy to do. Also, you used a large paintbrush quite a bit, which just looks unprofessional. I think the introduction at the beginning are really too long. They are almost as long as the movie itself...