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The Next Attempt

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My 2nd attempt at newgrounds, *crosses fingers*

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Yes, everyone. this is Cry's channel..I think.

((( SMOOTH ANIMATION )))

This was ute and very good on the animation, it seemed almost "FBF" the only thing i could see needing work, is some "BACKROUNDS" like even another color other then white would improve, it was good animating very smooth and nice job on the multiple animations and not wasting space...

~X~

needs work

this was kinda boring to be honest, also u might want to fix the try again button on 2, its just hiting the outline, make a biger area to detect the button press

Even better than the last

This one shows you have honed the FBF technique a little more and thats great! I personally like little shorts because you can put so much energy in to something that doesn't take too long to watch (in effect tires out the the watcher). Keep it up!

not bad

Author's comments:

My 2nd attempt at newgrounds, *crosses fingers*

My comments:

Nice efforts, and i see that this is your only animation so good improvements from whatever your other one was.
next time, make it a bit longer and maybe have a look at the audio portal too. it should be able to help you out.

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6,938
Votes
34
Score
3.47 / 5.00

Uploaded
Mar 9, 2005
8:20 PM EST