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Good job, keep it up.

Animation a bit jerky at points, the scene with drink being slammed down was too long, though definately a good start. Strong premise, good music choice, great ending. You may want to revisit and retry this one after you get better with flash and do a few other submissions. You did a good job with the atmosphere, the color theme and the rays of moonlight set it off well.

One suggestion: The skeleton should have been a coffin, since it seems the subject was recently buried and they tend to bury people in coffins these day, or so I hear...

Good, but could use some work

You've got a great style going there and the graphics were nice, but it seemed more like a slide show than an animation. There were too many scenes with nothing happening. Your motion tweens are too slow also, people don't move that slow

I would suggest that you add more movement to those long slow scenes, maybe change camera angles here and there.

all in all that's pretty damn good, just too slow

that was funny as hell

dude i laughed my ass off good job

loved it

i loved it man.just fix the song and itd be perfect.its really good man


not too bad just seems unfinished....scenes are dragged out waaay too long and the animation is abit jerky an unfinished....lots of room for improvment however a gd climax at the end......mayb at little less predictable on the choice of music?

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3.52 / 5.00

Mar 8, 2005
1:31 AM EST
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