((( DECENT ART )))

This was an ok flash, seemed abit short, but it had some good art, and great shadings on the characters, the voices were hard to hear the audio sounds muffled or something, also there could have been more thought into the story as it ended short and i was still confused after that....

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zoe...excellent *_* ...EXCELLENT

Ok...

I think this was better than you're recent addition...BUT I offer a suggestion....stop tryin to be dark by makin your cartoon dark (color wise) you can achieve the same dark affect w/out toning the color down....as a matter of fact it makes it more comedic to use vibrant colors w/dark content.....I donno...jus throwin it out there....stay away from Firth-esque stuff though....you'll get pigeonholed quick and we won't know where you start and he ends.

cute, i like their voices

the dialogue was great and you've got a quote from kids in the hall in your profile, so you're pretty cool :)

heh

I particularly liked the way they walked.